waah waah! Kya baat hai! The entire conflict of mankind summed up in two lines...... charged... powerful... Zor ka jhatka zor se lage... Very nice :-) Cheers! Minakshi
Ijaazat ke bagair kuch arz karne ki maafi chahti hoon…
na aks bhaari na dhadkan, na bhook badi na pyaar, astitva inka zindagi se hai, soch jahan sarkar... soch par jo chaye badal, uljhan ban baithi saut, isi kashmakash mein zindagi hai... ab isi kashmakash mein maut...
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You are most welcome sir.
aur maine bhi aapse inspire ho kar fir se kuch koshish ki hai.. aaiyega, nosh farmaiyega. :-)
thankyou for ur compliments.
:)
i shall come back for more!
Very nice. Don't understand every nuance, but so what. Nice. It's the eternal paheli of the chakraviyuh that is zindagi. Keep penning.
its beautiful... tow lines which convey so much...
waah waah! Kya baat hai!
The entire conflict of mankind summed up in two lines...... charged... powerful... Zor ka jhatka zor se lage...
Very nice :-)
Cheers!
Minakshi
Ijaazat ke bagair kuch arz karne ki maafi chahti hoon…
na aks bhaari na dhadkan, na bhook badi na pyaar,
astitva inka zindagi se hai, soch jahan sarkar...
soch par jo chaye badal, uljhan ban baithi saut,
isi kashmakash mein zindagi hai... ab isi kashmakash mein maut...
eee thoda uper se gaya... par acha hai :P
tamarind says....vyom aur harjee....u know all but know nothing at all.....paheli , paheli hi rehti.....hai....
Sujith: Harjee... great copy.
Tony: Harjee... great copy.
Alok: Now I don't understand Tony and Sujith.
wah re mere sher...kya baat kahi hai...
kahaan kho gaye harjee sahib ??
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