25.11.06

Paheli

Aks bhaari ke dhadkan, pyaar bada ke bhookh?
Dard hi raaz-e-zindagi, ya kaal kalaa kartoot?


Thank you Vyom, for the title and the correction.

11 comments:

Vyom said...

You are most welcome sir.

Vyom said...

aur maine bhi aapse inspire ho kar fir se kuch koshish ki hai.. aaiyega, nosh farmaiyega. :-)

handwritingguru said...

thankyou for ur compliments.

:)

i shall come back for more!

Livinontheedge said...

Very nice. Don't understand every nuance, but so what. Nice. It's the eternal paheli of the chakraviyuh that is zindagi. Keep penning.

Monika said...

its beautiful... tow lines which convey so much...

meenakshi said...

waah waah! Kya baat hai!
The entire conflict of mankind summed up in two lines...... charged... powerful... Zor ka jhatka zor se lage...
Very nice :-)
Cheers!
Minakshi

Ijaazat ke bagair kuch arz karne ki maafi chahti hoon…

na aks bhaari na dhadkan, na bhook badi na pyaar,
astitva inka zindagi se hai, soch jahan sarkar...
soch par jo chaye badal, uljhan ban baithi saut,
isi kashmakash mein zindagi hai... ab isi kashmakash mein maut...

faith said...

eee thoda uper se gaya... par acha hai :P

Anonymous said...

tamarind says....vyom aur harjee....u know all but know nothing at all.....paheli , paheli hi rehti.....hai....

byker said...

Sujith: Harjee... great copy.

Tony: Harjee... great copy.

Alok: Now I don't understand Tony and Sujith.

the pooh said...

wah re mere sher...kya baat kahi hai...

Bali from azadbali.blogspot said...

kahaan kho gaye harjee sahib ??