a lot of emotion.. in very few words =)
Sheer brilliance,the best so far.Dum ghootne lagta hai, Harjee;'gar tumhe apne 'Zindagi' par aetbaar na ho.
Kya baat hai Harjee... kamaal kar diya...But this was so unlike the jovial and zinda-dil Harjee we know... There is a yearning in this poem that is touching. Bahut sare mixed feelings...and ek ajeeb sa junoon dikhta hai...But just as always, the magic is there...bahut achcha tha :-)Cheers!Minakshi
bahut khoob! kya kissa hai zindagi ka! kayi melten hai zindagi ke kisse. kabhi, aise bhi, likh dete ho kisse zindagi ke. sunate ho tukdon mein, zindagi bhar ke jo kisse. jaise boondon mein barasta hai saawan, baraste hai kayi arth zindagi ke, in kisson mein.
aah!! kya baat hai.. *smiles*
Ek toh aap aaye nahin, duusra update kar diya aur bataaye nahin???Aur teesra, yeh toh bahut khoob kahi aapne. Ki dil khush kar ditta paji.Anyways, heres my draft of the same. Pardon my taking liberties with your creation.Zindagi ko zindagi, de zindagi, aye zindagi,ke zindagi se tang aa chuki hai ab yeh zindagi.Is zindagi mein zindagi, gar mil jaye ek baar,kasam teri zindagi, sau vaar doon main zindagi.Or sth like that, wait let me post and then see how it looks.
Wow. Zindagi rocks movie dekh li kya?because of d reiterartion of d word zindagi the poem like thing u've whippd up has got a bonus attraction.
Sujith: "What was that?"Tony: "I don't understand Hindi."Sujith: "Alok, what was that?"Alok: "I don't understand Harjee."
Waah waah! :)
to the people who are so busy discussing how life should be lived that they forget how to live it...great stuff man...i'll put it up on my bulletin board!
"zindagi se tang aa chuki hai ab zindagi"...aur phir bhi zindagi paane ki tamanaa?:)nice one:)
Zindagi Agar Zindagi Na HotiTo Hum Aashiq Nahi Musaafir HoteGum Aur Khushi Agar Milte Na HumeinTho Zindagi Ko Hum Keise Samajthe...
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