8.11.06

Zindagi...

Zindagi ko zindagi, de zindagi, aye zindagi,
ke zindagi se tang aa chuki hai ab zindagi.

Zindagi mein zindagi, gar mil jaye ek baar,
kasam mujhko zindagi ki, vaar doon sau zindagi.

15 comments:

DysfunctionaL said...

a lot of emotion.. in very few words =)

AB said...

Sheer brilliance,
the best so far.

Dum ghootne lagta hai, Harjee;

'gar tumhe apne 'Zindagi' par aetbaar na ho.

nishant said...

nice!

meenakshi said...

Kya baat hai Harjee... kamaal kar diya...
But this was so unlike the jovial and zinda-dil Harjee we know... There is a yearning in this poem that is touching. Bahut sare mixed feelings...and ek ajeeb sa junoon dikhta hai...
But just as always, the magic is there...bahut achcha tha :-)
Cheers!
Minakshi

ravali said...

bahut khoob! kya kissa hai zindagi ka! kayi melten hai zindagi ke kisse. kabhi, aise bhi, likh dete ho kisse zindagi ke. sunate ho tukdon mein, zindagi bhar ke jo kisse. jaise boondon mein barasta hai saawan, baraste hai kayi arth zindagi ke, in kisson mein.

faith said...

aah!! kya baat hai.. *smiles*

AakASH!!! said...

Ek toh aap aaye nahin, duusra update kar diya aur bataaye nahin???

Aur teesra, yeh toh bahut khoob kahi aapne. Ki dil khush kar ditta paji.

Anyways, heres my draft of the same. Pardon my taking liberties with your creation.


Zindagi ko zindagi, de zindagi, aye zindagi,
ke zindagi se tang aa chuki hai ab yeh zindagi.

Is zindagi mein zindagi, gar mil jaye ek baar,
kasam teri zindagi, sau vaar doon main zindagi.


Or sth like that, wait let me post and then see how it looks.

.:Infektia:. said...

Wow. Zindagi rocks movie dekh li kya?
because of d reiterartion of d word zindagi the poem like thing u've whippd up has got a bonus attraction.

Tony said...

Sujith: "What was that?"
Tony: "I don't understand Hindi."
Sujith: "Alok, what was that?"
Alok: "I don't understand Harjee."

lovemarks said...

Waah waah! :)

relentlesslyrestless said...

to the people who are so busy discussing how life should be lived that they forget how to live it...
great stuff man...i'll put it up on my bulletin board!

she said...

nice...

Yashita said...

"zindagi se tang aa chuki hai ab zindagi"...aur phir bhi zindagi paane ki tamanaa?:)
nice one:)

the pooh said...

Zindagi Agar Zindagi Na Hoti
To Hum Aashiq Nahi Musaafir Hote
Gum Aur Khushi Agar Milte Na Humein
Tho Zindagi Ko Hum Keise Samajthe...

Meeta said...

Nice!!