27.2.07

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Dhoond raha hoon raaste, dil ke ayeene mein
Kaise bechoon khwahishon ko, khwaabon ke bazaar mein.


Will be back soon.

27 comments:

Anonymous said...

Mashaallah ! and Muuwwwaaahhh!
wonderful piece..

Z & N

wiseling said...

Very nice.. it's been a while :)

the pooh said...

wah!wah !

Anonymous said...

Dang it! now You make me learn hindi... This is solely my one of the stupidest and silly attempt to show off my hindi ... to you.

This is without Z's help

Dil se jo khwahish nekle, woh to bas hoti hai anmol,
Bechoa us haseen khwaab ko jo maap sakta hai uska mol.

N :)

Anonymous said...

so here is the updated version ... consider this one... and ignore the earlier one....

And gujaratis may not be able to understand hindi that well...as north indians can do.... but we are good enough to atleast try...

Dil se jo khwahish nekle... woh to bas hoti hai anmol,
Phir bhi agar bech sako to becho usse... jo maap sakta hai uska tol.

N

AakASH!!! said...

Hamesha ki tarah sarkaar,
aapke khayaalon ka koi saani nahin
aur hai yahi meri darkaar,
tum jaisa kisi mein paani nahin.

Bole toh baki sab paani kam hain... :p

Now seriously, accordingly this line needs to be turned into a sher (yeh khayaal apne aap mein shaayari hai). Toh arz kiya hai:

Dhoond rahaa huun khoye raste, dil ke is aayeene mein
Khwahishon ko bechoon kaise, in khwabon ke bazaar mein

The Grouch said...

bechne kya jao ge Harjee?

bik jaayenge ?

khwahishon ko math tolo, zindigi-e-tarazoo: is laayak nahi.

bali

Puneet said...

but I did not get one thing..
khwahisen to khwaabon ka hi ek bimb hoti hain..kyon koi khwahishen khwabon ke bazaar main bechega..wont it be appropriate ki "kaise bechoon(or bachaon) khwahishen hakeequt ke is bazzar main...."

Minakshi Singh said...

Khwaabon ke bazaar mein,khwahishon ke mele hain...
Rang birange sapne sajaaye, kayi palkon ke tthele hain...

Kuch chote, kuch bade, kuch heere motiyon jade...
Kuch naye, kuch puraane, kuch yunhi jaane pehchaane...

Is khwahishon ke bazaar mein, mere bhi do tthele the,
In khwahishon ki jhurnutth mein, baithe kuch akele the...

Bech deta khwahishon ko, naye toh phir bhi khilte,
Par aankta kaise mulya inka, aise aankde kahan milte...

Samet raha hoon aaj phir, khwahishon ki apni potli,
Baant lenge ek pal ko, gar mila saathi koi kabhi...

Welcome back... :-)

Noojes said...

I wish I understood what u said

Monika said...

paaji how to u manage to do this evertime u post its really lovely

devotica said...

ayeena dekh kar kehtey hain woh
"raastey nazar nahin aatey mujhe"

gar nazron mein humaari jhaank lete
toh khud hi khud ke khuda-gawah ho jaatey!


fond hellos
nikita

Rangbadloo Girgit said...

To sell dreams is a reality I think everyone's afraid of...I think it's only the childhood when one can really cehrish dreams and believe there are for keeps...I wanted to be grownup always...Now that I am one, this flea market seems to be an increasing reality...

Monika said...

i tagged u, check out the details at my blog :)

Anonymous said...

khwahishen bikati nahi kisi bazaar mein,wo moti hein jinse khwabon ki ladiyan sajai jati hain, jinhe poora karne ke liye aap, apne ateet ko bhool kar aage badh rahe ho.

Simar Kohli said...

hey! lovely blog. Tried to leave a comment on the other blog, but failed. your photographs are really "fresh". which camera do you use?

Simar Kohli said...

Way to go! seriously.
All the best with writing and esp, with photography.
Which camera do u use?

nishant said...

WAH!WAH!SUBHANALLAH!

ankurindia said...

nice blog

lovemarks said...

simple and profound -perfect as is! :)


kahan ho???

Tony said...

Now you know.

Aradhana said...

I absolutely love this one:)

Neetal Mistry said...

waiting for a new post :)

Mahfuuz said...

kuchh baich aaya huun, kuchh bas bik chhuke samjho....thakk gaye the yeh tere intezaar mein

Neetal said...

I Don't miss My Harjee, Sirjee. :P :S

Tutti Frutti said...

How come you haven`t written anything since .....eternity on your blog?

Have to say you are a deep thinker.Thats kind of striking in your work.

Sigh! Back to Studies.

Which Main? What Cross? said...

Nice.